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盤點留學生在essay寫作中常見的14個錯誤(上)

發表時間:2018-05-20

留學生essay寫作

很多留學生在寫essay之后總會因為一些小錯誤被扣分,稱它們為小錯誤,是因為這些錯誤多半不是基礎差造成的,而是習慣不好導致的。下面我們來看看同學們有哪些需要改正的寫作習慣。

      第一個錯誤:逗號之后字母大寫

      可能會有同學問:真的會出現這種低級錯誤嗎?Meeloun小編表示一點不夸張。比如:
      Despite a fall in the value of the pound, The UK economy remained strong.

      正確的是什么,想必無需我多說了。

      第二個錯誤:用And和But做句首

      盡管在一般的寫作中,and和but做句首是完全沒有問題的??傻搅薳ssay寫作這兒,難免會讓老師覺得,你的作文很乏味,很單調,很屌絲。

      比如: 
      The government should decrease the price of train travel. And car tax should be increased. 

      更加合理的寫法是: 
      The government should decrease the price of train travel. As well as that, car tax should be decreased. 

      又或者: 
      The government should decrease the price of train travel, and car tax should be decreased. 

      第三個錯誤:使用模糊的數字表達

      這絕對是習慣造成的典型問題,“大約,左右,有些,差不多,等等”這樣的表達在我們中文十分常見,可要是出現在你的作業里,就會讓老師覺得不夠嚴謹,

      比如: 
      This essay will offer some reasons why sports education in schools is important. 

      合理的寫法是: 
      This essay will offer two reasons why sports education in schools is important. 

      第四個錯誤:前后句子內容重疊

      不得不說,如果你的文章里出現這個問題,那么你的代詞應該沒怎么學好。

      比如:
      One advantage of an increase in the number of people who exercise is a lowering of the obesity rate. When people exercise more, the number of obese people falls. Therefore, regular exercise can cut obesity. 

      更合理的寫法是:
      One advantage of an increase in the number of people who exercise is a lowering of the obesity rate. When people exercise, their bodies burn more calories than when they are sedentary. These calories are taken from the body’s fat stores. Thus, when there is an increase in the amount of physical activity, more people burn through their body fat, causing the rate of obesity to fall.

      第五個錯誤:用詞錯誤

      單詞使用的精確性,以及前后句子語境,是造成用詞錯誤的主要原因。有些表達僅適合正式的寫作,而有些則不。

      比如:
      Due to a terrible rise in the unemployment rate, over a million people now sadly rely on unemployment benefits.

      合理的寫法是:
      Due to a large rise in the unemployment rate, over a million people now rely on unemployment benefits. 

      第六個錯誤:very用法不準確

      very出現在你的essay里,難免會讓考官覺得你有些:懶。有N多個比very好用的單詞,可以使得句子更貼切,更富內涵,更形象生動。

      比如:
      In 1918, there was a very high inflation rate.

      合理寫法: 
      In 1918, there was an extremely high inflation rate.

      或者:
      in 1918, the inflation rate was the highest in British history.

      第七個錯誤:文中使用問句

      有些“杠精”會說,有些范文里不是用了問句嗎?難道我就不能用?嗯...你說得對,你想用就用,我建議理智的學生,盡量不要使用問句。就像高考作文里,你寫一句:難道這么淺顯的道理你都不懂?你想老師看到怎么想。

      相比問句,你也有100種可以改變它的方法,

      比如:
      How can the government decrease pollution?

      你可以寫:
      Citizens are asking how the government can decrease pollution.

      以上小錯誤都不是同學們學術水平的問題,而是寫作習慣的問題。因此Meeloun小編建議大家平時就該注意自己的寫作習慣,別丟不該丟的分!對于essay寫作需要潤色的同學可以聯系我們的客服哦!

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