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盤點留學生在essay寫作中常見的14個錯誤(下)

發表時間:2018-05-21

留學生essay寫作

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      第八個錯誤:無力的形容詞

      除了詞窮,和懶惰,沒法徹底解釋這個錯誤的原因。比如:nice, good, bad這些看似正確,實際卻沒有辦法展現描述作用的形容詞,都是應該徹底避免的。

      比如:
      Seoul is a good city for tourists. 

      可以改為:
      Seoul has a lot of facilities for tourists. 

      第九個錯誤:輕易地使用Get

      get通常多見于口語表達,因為有太多更精準的動詞可以替代它。

      比如:
      The CEO was hospitalised after he got pneumonia.

      可以改為:
      The CEO was hospitalised after he caught pneumonia.

      又或者:
      Traditionally, children get presents from their parents on Christmas Day. 

      可以改為:
      Traditionally, children receive presents from their parents on Christmas Day. 

      第十個錯誤:毫無意義的重復

      這個錯誤有點類似中文里的,凱旋歸來。凱旋原本就有勝利歸來的意思。再加歸來,這個“回”的動作就重復了。

      比如:
      Students should learn and study English from a young age. 

      可以改為:
      Students should study English from a young age.

      又比如:
      Americans from the United States have higher rates of lung cancer. 

      可以改為:
      People from the United States have higher rates of lung cancer. 

      第十一個錯誤:使用個人經歷作例子

      看到這兒,“杠精”又要跳出來了,只能用想到個人經歷做例子了,難道不行嗎?當然沒有問題,但記住哪怕使用個人例子,你也要把語氣調整到正式的環境下。

      比如:
      My parents frequently work late in order to make ends meet, and this has a big impact on the amount of time I get to communicate with them. 

      改為:
      My parents today are working longer hours in order to sufficiently provide for their children, which is having an enormous impact on the amount available time for face to face communication. 

      第十二個錯誤:表達過于冗長

      怎么判斷句子寫的冗長?很簡單,把句子里單詞一個個去掉,看哪些去掉后,意思不變就代表這個詞多余了!

      舉個例子:
      Even if employees engage in their jobs for a long time, they often fail to climb the business ladder, which is regularly the most common goal, therefore, they must face the harsh reality of staying in the same position for years. 

      改為:
      Even if employees stay in one job for a long time, they will often fail to climb the business ladder. 

      第十三個錯誤:不使用連接詞

      連接詞,除了讓句子語氣更通順,還有個好處,是讓讀者可以提前判斷句子之間的邏輯關系。

      比如:
      Mexicans will prefer Madrid as their most visited city. Americans will most likely go to Paris. Canadians love traveling to Istanbul the most.

      改為:
      To begin with, Mexicans will prefer Madrid as their most visited city. In contrast, Americans will most like to go to Paris. Lastly, Canadians love traveling to Istanbul the most.

      最后一個:不使用高級詞匯

      這個與你積累單詞有很大關系,同義詞的用法是最佳擴展方法。動詞,形容詞,詞組搭配是最容易擴展的。

      比如:
      Recent research done by Harvard University shows that 65% of Americans work more than 50 hours a week.

      改為:
      Recent research conducted by Havard University shows that 65% of Americans work more than 50 hours a week.

      這些個小錯誤,看似都無傷大雅,可一旦出現若干個,那么essay的整體水平,就會被無形的壓低。到頭來你會說,明明寫的又對,又能論證,還不跑題,為何老師總是為難我過不了7呢?答案其實就在這里了。平日里,養成一個優秀的寫作習慣,能夠潛移默化的提高你寫作水平。

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