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        Essay作為普通作業,也就是我們常說的老師布置的寫作或者是課外作業的統稱。Essay對于很多剛到國外留學的中國同學來說,想自己單獨完成一篇Essay還是存在一定的難度的,Essay對格式的要求,比如寫作格式,寫作結構,字體字號要求,相對來說是比較嚴謹的。對于剛開始寫Essay的同學來說,建議可以通過模仿的方式來摸索Essay寫作的套路。比如在圖書館下載一些已發表的高品質Essay進行仔細閱讀和觀察,模仿這篇Essay的結構,內容安排以及它的格式,總結文章的總體架構,文字語言以及邏輯結構,從而提升自己的Essay代寫能力。下面小編將從從句子和段落兩個層次進行教大家如何進行模仿訓練。

Essay代寫

        首先是對句子的模仿。句子是組成一篇Essay的基本單位,所以如果能先寫好句子,那么一篇優質高分的Essay也就不是什么難事了。通過大量模仿優質Essay的句式和句子結構,我們能夠將其內化,并在寫作時做到融會貫通。句型模仿訓練的前提是尋找優秀的材料,并提取出相應的句型進行大量的訓練。通過大量的模仿將這些優秀的句型變成我們自己在寫Essay的時候表達的一部分。

        目前對于句子模仿從易到難主要有兩個方式:替換單詞和提取句型

        1、替換單詞

        把句子進行單詞替換是最基本的方法,這在Essay寫作中降低抄襲率也是常用的方法。

        舉例,看下面句子:Globalisation and new technology—the telephone,the steamship,the train—had knitted the world together.

        我們可以將上面的句子相應改一下:The world is changing at a rapid pace.Globalisation and new technology—the internet,the airplane,the high-speed train—have knitted the world together.

        再比如:As is so often pointed out,knowledge is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil.

        我們可以將其中的knowledge替換為那些具有兩面性的事物,比如nuclear technology/gene engineering/international trade等:As is so often pointed out,nuclear technology/gene engineering/international trade is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil.

        2、提取句式

        提取句式是在單詞替換的基礎上發展而來,它的難度更高,但訓練效果也會更好。在做此類練習時,我們要先對一個句子進行分析,從中提取出一個“通用模板”,然后根據這個模板進行造句練習。舉個例子,有這樣一個句子:It is a disturbing omen for the Chinese economy.For all the talk of reform,many government officials still want to paper over bad loans.With credit going to keep moribund companies alive,China’s debt levels have soared even as growth has slowed.

        我們可以提取出這樣的句型:For all the talk of...still...,然后再把這個句型用到自己的Essay寫作當中去

        比如可以說:For all the talk of equal rights for women,gender discrimination is still rife in the workplace.

        又比如這個句子:China’s advance is all the more potent in the context of a series of disappointments for democrats since 2000.The first great setback was in Russia.After the fall of the Berlin Wall in 1989 the democratisation of the old Soviet Union seemed inevitable.

        提取出來的句型是...is all the more potent in the context of...

        我們可以寫:

        a)The appeal of online education is all the more potent in the context of soaring university tuition fees.

        b)Regulating social media is all the more tricky in the context of widespread use of smartphones by which everyone is able to voice their opinions.

        還有這個例子:So it came as a shock last month when a bill sprinted through the lower house of Congress,on the first day of a new session,that sets out to change the terms of their 30-year concessions after only 17 years.

        我們可以提取出來的句型是It came as a shock...when...

        比如可以說:It came as a shock last week when an explosion shaked New York City and injured 29 people.

        對于下面這個句子:To say that the“age of the grand hotel ran from 1860 to 1960”is to make it seem that Paris’s Grand had no antecedents.

        我們可以提取出To say that...is to make it seem that...這個類比句型,模仿寫出:To say that universities should merely provide students with employment skills is to make it seem that theoretical knowledge is of secondary importance.

        平時在閱讀中要有意識地積累這類經典句式,并通過模仿造句地方式將它們內化,這樣寫出來的句子才會更加規范地道。

        其次是對對段落的模仿。通過對文章經典段落的模仿,我們能夠學習并熟悉段落的基本構架,段落展開方式,以及段落內部句子之間的承接等,在寫作時能夠更有效地組織自己的思想,寫出層次鮮明、邏輯嚴謹的段落和文章。

        舉個例子,一篇題為The curious case of the fall in crime的文章中,對當今西方社會犯罪率下降的原因有這樣一個論述:There is no single cause of the decline;rather,several have coincided.Western societies are growing older,and most crimes are committed by young men.Policing has improved greatly in recent decades,especially in big cities such as New York and London,with forces using computers to analyse the incidence of crime;in some parts of Manhattan this helped to reduce the robbery rate by over 95%.The epidemics of crack cocaine and heroin appear to have burnt out.

        這個段落的邏輯非常清晰。開頭第一句為主題句,后面三個句子進行展開:

        1.Western societies are growing older,and most crimes are committed by young men.

        2.Policing has improved greatly in recent decades.

        3.The epidemics of crack cocaine and heroin appear to have burnt out.

        我們可以對上面的段落框架進行模仿:There is no single cause of childhood obesity;rather,several have coincided.Many children have been surrounded by fast food outlets selling unhealthy foods such as hamburgers and hot dogs,which contain a lot of calories,sugar and salt.Moreover,their parents are too busy climbing up the career ladder to keep an eye on their eating habits.Lack of exercise also does its bit.Most children spend too much time sitting in their room watching TV or playing computer games,and too little doing outdoor activities.

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